I have alot of problems spotting my own errors can someone help me out...<3

>>6487
well what can I tell you? shit sux

ok srsly, the face is good, the neck is too long, the hands are shit, the hair is nice, I think the arms are too short, my dick's not standing, the picture is too big, the shading is sloppy, wtf is that in the lower left corner, no not her left. a glove maybe I dunno.. IS THIS A PERSOCON???
Who the fuck is S-SHIKINAMI? The guy who came in her eyes? Oh wait, those are tears. nm
Fuck wait it's a IJN destroyer rite? Sweet, is this sum WWII drama? The americans sunk that shit and she's all devastated isn't she? And her husband was the captain, I can see it now. I love your idea, that's soo cool! But those ears don't match the setting, you need to get real man

>>6489
YAY~ thanks Anon for the crit...I get on it..I do an updated one

>>6496
Make me a full body picture of this girl, from front, without hiding hands, arms, legs and feets. And without any hueg trenchcoat or some shit, obscuring the majority of her anatomical features. Then I can give you more helpful feedback.

You have some nice style going on. Not mind-blowing, but it's alright. Work on it

"Tar of the Day"

An attempt to step away from manga inspired art
>>6498

okay anon I'll get on it...

"My War"

>>6489

Not important, but I thought I'd help clarify. The girl he drew in that pic is most likely Asuka Langley Soryu, from Neon Genesis Evangelion. In the second Rebuild movie, released recently, she had her last name changed from Soryu to Shikinami.

Generic Fanart

concept for Areia Olho from my manga

>>6500
You still haven't gotten on shit, hence no comments. The rest is like the rest, nothing new to say.