Still open canvas...

They both look really good. A lot better brighter. The girl does have a few issues but they're minor and you already seem aware of the lopsidedness. And much credit for actually giving a female hips, rare find in art nowadays.

I like the coloring of the second picture a lot. You seem to actually do better on the tablet. Only concern is his left arm in the back. It seems off.

Nice work.

I recolored LOSER in Open Canvas 1.1. I like this version better as far as the coloring goes...

I bought Open Canvas 4.5 and this is my first pic in it...unfortunately, this one came out looking more synthetic. I have to figure out the tools better...watching some of the event files from other users just leaves me puzzled...they look real and all, but I can't really figure out a lot about what they're doing...

Glad to see that you're still at it.

I enjoy the coloring of the first "Loser" pic more. But i think thats just your choice of colors in that one.

I think the coloring of the blue hair girl looks great. It plays a lot more to your style. It flows, keeping with the simplicity that you're going for. The picture itself is very good. Only one complaint, very little though:
The right arm on the knee looks stiff. Just add a slight bend to have it feel more natural.

Kudos on your color choice. Keep it up!

HS? The guy that makes the songs?

the guy. here's one...i cheated for the pose...did a bit of photo tracing on my gf, but cartoonified it plenty...was really just wanting some more line art to practice coloring.

http://www.crayonphysics.com/

might be something that you would want to check out