I'm thinking make his limbs and torso a bit thinner.

They look plump.

Simple answer, 'CRAP!' for the picture you have taken by a crap camera. Try again, next time using a scanner. That thing is kinda cheap these day

the foot looks really weird imo

Well, I like the drawing very much and I would love to see more of your art if it can be possible.

>>6246
haha you suck, its not a competition or something so there is no need for me to buy a scanner just want to show my drawing in here.. For the others,thanks for your feedback :)

Can i ask something? What kind of pen that is best for drawing? Because right now im using Artline 210 medium 0.6, Artline 206 0.4, and Pilot Drawing Pen (DR) pigment ink 0.2 that can be found in ordinary stores,so my opinion on this pen are nearly average because the ink cannot be refill and not like the G pen and 'kabura' pen that typically using nicer ink and,its kinda expensive too~ ;_;

I like it. Maybe add some toner or shading for blush on the face, joints etc.
Also, lose the socks for great success.

>>6244
what country r u from anyway?
You're a decent artist, tho your art is indecent, lol
I find that to be upsetting. Now draw hetero porn you cunt

>>6302
im from Singapore lmao the yaoi-ness have been affecting my drawing so I forgot how to draw regular hentai :D

>>the yaoi-ness have been affecting my drawing so I forgot

Don't give me that shit, rather give me something I can actually fap to

>>6316
sorry, all can you see in this thread is yaoi :)) hmm trying to adapt shading here..