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506117 No.6214  

How can I make this better?

>> No.6216  

Fix the chin, it be so big. The pose is kind of weird too, what the hell is she doing?
I like your toning and stuff though.

>> No.6217  

left breast a bit small compared to the right

>> No.6221  

>>6216

>>6217

Thank you for your crit, will fix and post more later. ^^ <3

>> No.6223  
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459454

Ok, here's a new one. The pose is kinda like looking down at her, I messed up trying to get her left arm to look like it was a little to the back of her.

Enjoy.

>> No.6224  

>>6223

If you're looking down at her, the boobs are too far out. If they're meant to be big, then the shape should be fully defined and not fading into the cloth of the stomach. And they're uneven, too.

That's the biggest gripe I have with it, mainly because I can't be assed to look at it more closely.



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