I like the style, but it must be a hassle for her to get dressed every day. It looks like she has to buckle up 7 individual belts.

I RECOGNIZE THAT STYLE

DG at Beast's Lair, innit?

Indeed that is me! Who might you be?

>>6295

JUST KEEP ON GUESSING HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I'll give you a hint, I participated in Type-A, but just barely.

Facial Expressions Sketches.
>>6296
Anyway I'd guess you're lukannon or Reiku, but I'm putting my bets on luka.

>>6292
Yes, its probably a hassle to buckle up up the 7 buckles. But she has a strange obsession with buckles and leather(granted the design came before I decided to add that to her personality). But she's a witch, so theres probably quick ways around it!

>>6291
that staff is going through her fukken groin
the hat is shit

That depends how you look at it. Its actually behind her and is not going through her groin. But if you wish to look at it that way, I can't stop you and I'm not up to caring.

Just thought I'll do a general standing design drawing. I was pondering some design changes but in the end, never really made any. I ended up rubbing out my changes to design since they didn't look right.

Not enough belts.

>>and I'm not up to caring

me and you both bra'

>>6291

She's got a long dick. I like bitches with long dicks.

Simple answer, 'CRAP!' for the picture you have taken by a crap camera. Try again, next time using a scanner. That thing is kinda cheap these day

the foot looks really weird imo

Well, I like the drawing very much and I would love to see more of your art if it can be possible.

>>6246
haha you suck, its not a competition or something so there is no need for me to buy a scanner just want to show my drawing in here.. For the others,thanks for your feedback :)

Can i ask something? What kind of pen that is best for drawing? Because right now im using Artline 210 medium 0.6, Artline 206 0.4, and Pilot Drawing Pen (DR) pigment ink 0.2 that can be found in ordinary stores,so my opinion on this pen are nearly average because the ink cannot be refill and not like the G pen and 'kabura' pen that typically using nicer ink and,its kinda expensive too~ ;_;

I like it. Maybe add some toner or shading for blush on the face, joints etc.
Also, lose the socks for great success.

>>6244
what country r u from anyway?
You're a decent artist, tho your art is indecent, lol
I find that to be upsetting. Now draw hetero porn you cunt

>>6302
im from Singapore lmao the yaoi-ness have been affecting my drawing so I forgot how to draw regular hentai :D

>>the yaoi-ness have been affecting my drawing so I forgot

Don't give me that shit, rather give me something I can actually fap to

>>6316
sorry, all can you see in this thread is yaoi :)) hmm trying to adapt shading here..

>>6279
OH MAN yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

wtf is this

Your drawing is er, never mind however, im kinda interested on the 'grid line',what the purpose of that?

>>6282
The grid increases the accuracy of the copy - making sure things are drawn in the exact right places. Copying small segments of the picture at a time is easier than copying the whole at once.

>>6287

In other words, it's a shortcut to making a copy if you don't care about your integrity as an artist.

That's fine though, it's just animu, not like it's fine art.

Cut out the pieces along the lines and make it a puzzle, OP.

>>6289
Just as fine musicians have used metronomes. There's nothing shameful about using a grid in and of itself.

>>6289
"fine" artists? Doubtfully to copy other peoples original work I'm sure...
>>6290
no, but this is fucking useless. op won't learn shit from this.. shit. But I guess if that's not the point, what does it matter?
however, it sort of makes me wonder what the point of this is? op obviously already have the original picture?
Why make an exact copy of it, especially in a way that teaches you the absolute minimum about drawing? ..useless

>>6303
I only did it for fun. No need to get so harsh about it.

>>6303

While I disagree with the use of the grid, personally, drawing from reference is the most basic skill for any artist. You can't expect to get anywhere if you can't do this, and anyone who claims otherwise is merely pontificating on their own stupidity.

And as OP said, why does it matter anyway when it's clearly just for fun?

>>6304
I did it for fun too

>>6305
The grid is as close as you can get to downright copying without actually tracing. If you're out to learn something, you might as well draw stick figures...

Anyway what does it matter? Thing is; it doesn't! ...and I can just rave on about it anyway! Is there even a point? No one gives a shit, fukken great rite? Beauty of the internet, I love it

>>6233 Anatomy? Who needs anatomy this is ANIME!

There...isn't exactly a whole lot of anatomy in the picture to remark on in the first place...

It's not bad, as far as animu goes, but from what I can see you may indeed have problems. The hands very in size a lot, which is okay for animu, but if you're going for realistic proportions they should approximately cover the face(not the entire head under the hairline, just from about chin to eyebrows). They can get smaller or larger, sure, but taht's a pretty good baseline.

Other than that, there's not much to say, it's typical animu but pretty solid for typical animu. The figure in the center bothers me; the waist is a little wide compared to her shoulders and legs, so definitely watch that, and she's waaay too tense; your shoulders are too high up. Unless that's what you were intending. Also looks anorexic.

>>6243
Thanks for those, will do my best to incorporate them. Will post the final if I ever get time to do complete it.

Keeping the shit in 1 thread. The upper hand sucks shit, and something weird about the stomach area. Any suggestions?

>>6267
Nice! Her torso could be thinner. Maybe start the lines under the middle of her boobs. What you see from that angle would be the thin part of her waist, while the thicker ribcage area is hidden behind her big boobs. Also, the line of her underwear is too straight across for that angle. When looking from above like that, her underwear should bow down more. Imagine her body is a cylinder. Cut the cylinder straight across and look at it straight on from the side. The line of the cut would be straight. Now look at the cylinder from above, like the angle you've drawn, and the circle of that cylinder will look curved like the letter U. Draw the underwear like that, with a big curve and so you see a lot less of the material. Less is more. :)

Hoping that you can finish this.. :)

Dr. Peace in his younger years?

who's dr. peace?

No More Heroes.

critique

sorry, critique has gone on vacation

>>6270

This is a faster version of the animation.

Here's the original concept art.

LOL just looking at this, already makes me take a long laugh :D

Here's the original photo used for the character.

So. How can I improve the animation? What do you suggest?

I'm sure there's like game making programs that just let you enter the graphics and make such games.

source of artwork?

>>6252
well, I DID draw it.
http://crossxaber.deviantart.com/

>>6253

That being the case, you did a pretty good job. There's not a whole lot I can see that's wrong atm, maybe the angling of the back and the curve of the spine, but that's negligible. It's a good piece, the hair's movement adds interest to an otherwise static position, and the red motif throughout also brings it together quite well.

>>6254
thank for point it out for me.

It's well drawn, but I think you should pay more attention to choosing the colours and where to put them. What disturbs me the most is the colour of the hair in your picture - it's the only light thing in the whole picture and just pops out and leaves everything else flat. You could have tried adding some white (or light gray, whatever) to a couple of other parts of the picture, like the dark part of the blade or some parts of her armour, preferably lower parts in order to get some sort of a colour balance.

>>6259

I disagree; achieving balance doesn't necessarily require the same kind of color. The brightness of the blade goes a long way towards solving the flatness problem, even if it is less bright than the hair. The fact that both curve also helps; instead of it being split neatly across the middle, the curves change the divide into a more interesting twist.

It's a lot more apparent when you're looking at the thumbnail version. Incidentally, I don't disagree with your assessment completely, but it's not nearly as bad as you're making it out to be.

...Actually, just making one of the white patches in the lower left larger/whiter would probably fix the composition problems.

>>6260
Depends on who's talking (and on your monitor) I guess, to me, it nearly ruins a great picture. The hair looks like it's from a completely different picture or something.

Well, here's what we originally agreed on.

Worked on and off on this for about forty-five minutes in class. I'm too slow.

Hands look like they're small again, face looks a little off. The wrinkles are rather arbitrary and seem slightly off.

The necklace is just there to add balance to the outfit.

>>6225

Samefag.

Now that I think about it, the arms are mismatched quite a bit. I figured it'd be okay if she was sitting at an angle, but the left's elbow should still be out farther.

y/n?

>>6226
Yes that is correct. You will recieve 10 lashes
I really like how you draw her face tho, she looks really nice.

>>6227

I'd like to say thanks for the compliment, but it's a rather small consolation.

Well, it's not as though I didn't consider the things you mentioned. Ah well, will just have to be careful next time.

TAKE THIS

MY LOVE MY ANGER AND ALL OF MY SORROW

About an hour because I fixed the arm a lot. The coffee cups' sizes might be mismatched due to no foreshortening or something, but eh.

Did I fix last time's mistakes? I think the wrinkles might still be weird, and the shoulders may still be at too big of an angle, but I think the latter might be okay because of the pose.

>>6230

I just realized that the arms may be a little too thin too. Or is that alright?

>>6230

The hands still seem quite small, and sure the arms are a tad thin too, but I like it all the same. Good work on the clothes you know.

>>6230

she gives off a nice mood, reminds me a lot of Alpha from Yokohama Kaidashi Kikou.

I wish more people smiled like this IRL. now I am all depressed thx :V

>>6238

Haha, that's sort of what I was going for, so it makes me happy to hear that.

>>6232

Haha, thanks. Looks like I've still got a ways to go, huh?
...And I'm late by liek three weeks, but I've been really busy, sorry. Just checked the number of hidden posts and never scrolled down thinking nobody had commented.

Will try to post something else as son as possible, but I've got actual art assignments I need to finish before my grade gets blown out of the water.

>>6230

This is an excellent start. The pose is perfect. The angle of the shoulders is perfect. The face depicts a subtle coquettish quality that is hard to do with only a few lines. Fix some of the geometric issues and it could be very good.

Fix the chin, it be so big. The pose is kind of weird too, what the hell is she doing?
I like your toning and stuff though.

left breast a bit small compared to the right

>>6216

>>6217

Thank you for your crit, will fix and post more later. ^^ <3

Ok, here's a new one. The pose is kinda like looking down at her, I messed up trying to get her left arm to look like it was a little to the back of her.

Enjoy.

>>6223

If you're looking down at her, the boobs are too far out. If they're meant to be big, then the shape should be fully defined and not fading into the cloth of the stomach. And they're uneven, too.

That's the biggest gripe I have with it, mainly because I can't be assed to look at it more closely.