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My style... HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:17 No.6408 [Reply]

Hey guys...I've been trying to perfect a new style for a while now. It's pretty simple looking, but I want it to have room for as much detail as I want without making the drawings too cluttered. Anyway, the inspirado for the style is a mixture of Calvin and Hobbes, Manga and those little 1 color pamplets you find at hospitals and such called CLASSIC SCRIPTOGRAPHY.
I think I've gotten a'ight at getting what I want. Was wondering what III thinks. Sorry these aren't scanned. Only have a camera and didn't bother doing level adjustments or anything. These are just straight up unedited photos. Any specific pictures redlined welcomed. :) I know a couple of mistakes already on some (like this one...his back leg is just stupid)...but I'd like to see some redlines. Thanks...

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>>	HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:20 No.6412 File: 1231730403480.jpg -(804146 B, 1536x2048) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>	HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:21 No.6413 File: 1231730460936.jpg -(801226 B, 1536x2048) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>	HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:21 No.6414 File: 1231730512941.jpg -(783776 B, 1536x2048) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>	HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:22 No.6415 File: 1231730571402.jpg -(777983 B, 1536x2048) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. Was drawing Trencher...

>>	HS 09/01/11(Sun)19:23 No.6416 File: 1231730635661.jpg -(786702 B, 1536x2048) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. Meh, last one.

Don't Rape Larsa 09/01/11(Sun)20:24 No.6417

Interesting. I think your decision to simplify the faces take a lot away from the art. The bodies come off as being a bit more detailed while the faces are overly simple. Try finding a middle ground. I really think if you lower the detail on the bodies you'll get a smoother result. But experiment! Detailing the faces could give you more expression without having to clutter up the picture.
All in all its pretty good stuff, just tweak it a bit. You should try doing short comic scripts to put the style into action. You'll find that any style is put to a test when you have to draw using a degree of poses, expressions, and perspectives to tell a story. Even if it is just 1 to 3 panels.

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/14(Wed)12:48 No.6419 You SHOULD adjust the levels next time.

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/14(Wed)22:28 No.6420 Feels like, Tintin gone manga. It's fresh, mystifying, it makes me confused, it makes me hard, I feel like a 13 year old schoolboy again, fapping for reasons unknown. In short; I like it

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/15(Thu)03:58 No.6422 You need to work on your poses. Often times the feet seem off or something just looks way too funky.

Feedback... HS 09/01/15(Thu)19:17 No.6423

>>6417
Noted. Will play around with detail levels. I really like the faces how they are, mostly because with faces, I have a HUGE consistency problem if there's too many details to work with, thus the simplified, exagerrated details.
>>6419
Ok.
>>6420
I'll just pretend I didn't read the fapping part and say thanks. Glad you dig it.
>>6422
I know I have problems with feet, especially at odd angles...do you have any suggestions of practices or references to look at? I try to just keep the details in there, but the foot isn't really something I can look at from a 3rd person perspective on myself, so I can't really get a good idea of how to do the initial shape when sketching the pose...I understand where the ankle goes and that it's essentially a triangle/pyramid coming from there, but I'm trying my HARDEST to not resort to Rob Liefield feet...cause his feet are retardedly gay and I'd like to think even my mis-shapen feet are better than his shit. :)

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Lowbrow Critic 08/12/08(Mon)17:36 No.6379 [Reply]

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/12(Fri)11:48 No.6380 you tried so hard and got so far, but you're still a westerner attempting to draw japanese art

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/31(Wed)20:16 No.6395 Arms and hands are to thin/small/short.

Don't Rape Larsa 09/01/06(Tue)08:08 No.6398

Ok, this isn't all bad. You did do some good things here. You have potential, you should just work on anatomy. Nix the fancy perspectives and start with the basics. Try this website to pick up some early tips:
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/howtodraw/tutorials.html
And remember kids, anime/manga isn't the best art style in the world. Try drawing in the style you're most comfortable with first. you'll have a much bigger payoff in the end.

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/07(Wed)22:34 No.6402 HER LEGS ON FIRE!!

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Ranma And Akane ElZeviour 08/09/11(Thu)23:56 No.6235 [Reply]

just comment it, nothing important to say
critique me please! and don´t leave put a comment in my gallery! for the critiques!

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/09/14(Sun)19:44 No.6242 Those are some nice clouds. Your values are pretty good, but your lineart could use some work. Was this drawn from reference?

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/01(Thu)15:18 No.6396 Ranma-chans breast are drawn a little bit too high, but expect of that i think there's nothing that should be changed.Impressive.

>>	Lowbrow Critic 09/01/04(Sun)23:30 No.6397 File: 1231140622075.jpg -(46902 B, 500x362) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. nice

Lowbrow Critic 08/10/30(Thu)21:34 No.6333 [Reply]

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Lowbrow Critic 08/10/30(Thu)21:38 No.6334
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Whoops, sorry.
Was testing something, but I forgot my deletion password.
Bah.
Scanner made me lose like all the really light shading I did. Was a bit better on paper, I swear.
Source imaeg:
http://server50734.uk2net.com/bijin2/src/1219978663008.jpg

Lowbrow Critic 08/11/16(Sun)20:58 No.6350
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Here's another.
Pretty much the same story. Took a long time, problems with values. It's a little worse compared tot he last one, the face is pretty different so it ends up not looking like her at all. The expression is totally off.
Even so, I'm pretty satisfied, the patterning on the shirt tried my patience quite a bit so I'm glad to get it over with.
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>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/03(Wed)15:51 No.6366 thats awesome

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/19(Fri)07:01 No.6387 >>6334 Very cute.

Lowbrow Critic 08/12/24(Wed)00:30 No.6391
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How did I not notice the left girl's eyes didn't match...
Will be fixing this laters.
Ref was a Facebook photo of some people I know, so I will refrain from posting it this time out of respect for their privacy.

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Koyaro 08/12/21(Sun)21:08 No.6389 [Reply]

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Ada wong ElZeviour 08/09/11(Thu)23:45 No.6234 [Reply]

ada wong, i hope it likes you!
critique me!

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/09/12(Fri)08:16 No.6236 draw her in the act of anal intercourse with futa-jill valentine and you will be GOD!

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/15(Mon)21:53 No.6383 The nose/mouth area is a little out of perspective. Good use of stylistic shading.

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/18(Thu)11:18 No.6385 >The nose/mouth area is a little out of perspective a little?

Lowbrow Critic 08/12/14(Sun)18:39 No.6382 [Reply]

http://annortha.deviantart.com/

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Lowbrow Critic 08/12/12(Fri)20:01 No.6381 [Reply]

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Puyo Style Kiks 08/12/06(Sat)16:48 No.6376 [Reply]

Styled after Puyo Fever games. What cha think?
Not my character design BTW it's a friends. :/

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/07(Sun)08:52 No.6377 This closely resembles the style from the games.

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Lowbrow Critic 08/11/21(Fri)23:13 No.6352 [Reply]

what do you think?

>>	Lowbrow Critic 08/12/04(Thu)01:23 No.6374 Work on that whole head-exploding syndrome you've got there, but it's pretty good otherwise.

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