Still open canvas...

They both look really good. A lot better brighter. The girl does have a few issues but they're minor and you already seem aware of the lopsidedness. And much credit for actually giving a female hips, rare find in art nowadays.

I like the coloring of the second picture a lot. You seem to actually do better on the tablet. Only concern is his left arm in the back. It seems off.

Nice work.

I recolored LOSER in Open Canvas 1.1. I like this version better as far as the coloring goes...

I bought Open Canvas 4.5 and this is my first pic in it...unfortunately, this one came out looking more synthetic. I have to figure out the tools better...watching some of the event files from other users just leaves me puzzled...they look real and all, but I can't really figure out a lot about what they're doing...

Glad to see that you're still at it.

I enjoy the coloring of the first "Loser" pic more. But i think thats just your choice of colors in that one.

I think the coloring of the blue hair girl looks great. It plays a lot more to your style. It flows, keeping with the simplicity that you're going for. The picture itself is very good. Only one complaint, very little though:
The right arm on the knee looks stiff. Just add a slight bend to have it feel more natural.

Kudos on your color choice. Keep it up!

HS? The guy that makes the songs?

the guy. here's one...i cheated for the pose...did a bit of photo tracing on my gf, but cartoonified it plenty...was really just wanting some more line art to practice coloring.

http://www.crayonphysics.com/

might be something that you would want to check out

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=bDQQg0qMWgs
Here's a video of it being drawn.

I unfortunately (or fortunately) am aware of the weirdness of his chest and hair. That's what I get for doing this when I should be sleeping, and for not watching close enough.

Yes...I'm well aware she's "Half Bat" I was too lazy to draw in the wings.

Ok. To be honest, a lot of things are wrong here. Your proportions are off(compare the head to the body). The eye and lips are also extremely large. But seeing as this is anime inspired that's to be expected to a point.

The pose is dull(very stiff) and a lot of the body is hidden. I'm not aware of your habits but try drawing as much of the body as you can. That will help you with proportions as well. Also the ear in the background is very high making it off perspective.

The muscles on the stomach need shading as they come off as undefined. You're coloring looks rushed and messy.

Now don't take all that the wrong way, you're still ahead of a lot of other people. My advice is when doing character designs, draw the entire body. Even if the focus is just the face. As you get more comfortable with that try new poses. Find a method to your art, it seems you just kinda draw without worrying about measurements or perspective. Even if these aren't your strong suit, understanding them always make a better picture.

Don't worry about color right now, just shade with a pencil(or pen) so you can get use to values.

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>>6440

It was a quick sketch, and this was just Practice anyway. But I'll try to keep all that stuff in mind.

>>6442

Never, ever, EVER use that as an excuse. It's insulting to the people who actually work hard to improve their art and to the people who take the time to critique. If it's truly just a quick sketch, don't put it up for critique, goddamn.

>>6443

More of an Insult to myself than to them. It is a quick sketch yes, but I need to find out what wrong with my sketches, before I put up something big. I know what I'm doing

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